Thursday, 5 May 2011

Another Quick Addition

Right, about 70% of the way through my final draft. Here's how things stand right now:

Still to do: Hardening the lead antagonist. She is still a little weak, but it's improving. Giving her a little more of a sinister outlook, it'll make the cross from hidden to actual antagonist more smooth. I'm also seriously cutting down on the upper case letters for stage direction. It looks messy with so much of it. Other than that I only have half of a factory battle scene to write and a couple of small exposition scenes to slot in somewhere, then Gentlemen from Hell is finished and ready to be proofread and then handed in tomorrow. Looking good.

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